The Letter


June 18, 1899

Dear Miss Chandler:

Thank you for your letter concerning our patient, Mrs. Monica Chandler. I understand that you recently discovered that she is your mother and would like to know her condition and whether you can visit.

Mrs. Chandler came to us almost 20 years ago due to a diagnosis of post-partum depression. I believe this was after the birth of her second child, a female. She was committed to our institution by her husband, August Chandler.

For the last five years, Mrs. Chandler has been in a catatonic state, despite the efforts of our doctors. She has never had visitors to my knowledge. Although you can visit, I don’t think you or Mrs. Chandler would find such a visit very satisfactory.


Dr. Charles Wetherly

Medford Mental Facility


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4 comments on “The Letter
  1. OH! I really liked this story (letter). It makes my imagination go wild! LOL! I hope the daughter goes to see her mother! Great story.


  2. michael1148humphris says:

    One never know’s, but I would visit. This was a great take on the prompt picture. Well done.

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  3. Iain Kelly says:

    Great letter to imagine her reading. Good job. I hope she goes ahead and visits anyway.

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  4. I imagine the daughter feel guilty for her mother’s stare and is curious.


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