The River Chamo


They had spent three days camping by a lazy section of the Rio Chamo in New Mexico below Taos. Leslie and Bill had brought their raft with them. After much reading, they decided that this section of river was suitable for novices. After getting the raft ready and in the river, along with their gear, they climbed aboard.

It was smooth going at first. They knew how to paddle. As the river took a turn, the water got rougher. Bill yelled his concern to Leslie but she wanted to keep going.

They saw the rocky dropoff ahead, but it was too late. The raft flew up in the air and so did Leslie and Bill. They both landed on the bank, unharmed. As they sat up, trembling with shock, Bill quietly told Leslie to turn around slowly.

There sat a large black bear staring at them.

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6 comments on “The River Chamo
  1. michael1148humphris says:

    O those black bears they get everywhere. I bet he was laughing at them.🙂


  2. Love the set up here. I thought they wouldn’t make it in the raft. Then surprised by the bear. wonderful!


  3. rogershipp says:

    Hopefully, the bear was just enjoying the show and he will move on? Enjoyed!


  4. Singledust says:

    nice end – makes a lot for the reader to imagine. love these kind of stories!


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