The Spoiler

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”Why do some people have to spoil everything?” I wondered out loud, as I stared through the mesh of the screen door into the jungle of the yard. I was thinking of the old man at the pier. I had thought, last year when visiting here, that he was my friend. This year, it was clear he wasn’t.

I loved to go to the pier at sunset. The Gulf was so peaceful. The sunset so beautiful. A man was there who I used to enjoy talking to. No more. Now he only wanted to argue. I didn’t know why.


Rosemary Carlson

Business Consultant and Freelance Writer

One thought on “The Spoiler

  1. Thank you for joining us at Carrot Ranch, Rosemary! I enjoyed where you went with the prompt, and how staring at the mesh catches nagging thoughts.

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