Photo Prompt @ Dale Rogerson
She felt like she was strangling, suffocating in the drab, gray house. She imagined how it must feel in a mausoleum. It was emotional death to be trapped in this house. Someone from the outside would eventually find her, wouldn’t they?
He had made it palatable from the outside with the beautiful mural and bright floral colors at the entrance. Couldn’t they see the rudimentary wire gate?
She was locked in a small, sound-proof room, but she had almost pried open the lock. The lock clicked and she was free. When she reached the wire gate, he stood there laughing.
Thanks to Rochelle for hosting #FridayFictioneers and to Dale for the photo.
Well-described tale of horrendous captivity.
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Thank you!
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The stuff of nightmares
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Yes, it is!
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Ah dang! I was rooting for her!
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He’s toying with her. Cruel.
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Very cruel.
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I’m imagining a sequel where she puts a stop to his laughter. A cruel tale, but we’ll written.
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Thank you, Iain!
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She should keep trying. Even the villain has a weakness.
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Time to play bulldozer and get herself to the street. I wish her success!
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Thanks!
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YW!
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Foiled,but hopefully she will keep trying. He has to win them all, she only has to escape once.
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Thank you!
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He’s playing a cruel game. I can feel her desperation and then the understated shock at the end. Well told.
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Thank you, Margaret!
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A sinister tale laced with hopeful tension-until the end.
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She was, indeed, physically trapped. I was leaning more toward being emotionally trapped, as well as physically trapped. So many people are. Thank you for the comment!!
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Too bad she didn’t have a sharp knife hidden in her sleeve.
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The above is from Granonine 🙂
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Well told, a sinister story.
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gulp, wasn’t expecting that ending. The poor thing.
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How cruel, to feel so close to freedom and then to be caught once again. This is chilling. Well done.
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Thanks so much!
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